Rejection from Clarkesworld

Dear Cynthia,

Thank you for the opportunity to read “On Fate’s Waiting List.” Unfortunately, your story isn’t quite what we’re looking for right now. Each month, we receive hundreds of submissions and while I may like many of them, I can only publish twelve of them per year.

In the past, we’ve provided detailed feedback on our rejections, but I’m afraid that due to time considerations, we’re no longer able to offer that service. I appreciate your interest in Clarkesworld Magazine and hope that you’ll keep us in mind in the future.

Take care,

Neil Clarke
Publisher/Editor
Clarkesworld Magazine
www.clarkesworldmagazine.com

Simple form letter… but that’s all Clarkesworld does anymore as I hear it.
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I've Submitted

I just submitted my story “On Fate’s Waiting List” to Clarkesworld. They have a 36 hour average response time. I find this is making me more antsy about submitting than normal. Usually I just click send and try to forget about it, but this is going to come back to me so quickly I can’t stop thinking about it. Thanksgiving isn’t even helping.

Next story for me to work on is my world founding mythology story for Limna, the world in which my novel takes place.

Currently Reading:
Fantasy: Moonwise – Greer Gilman
Scholarly: Wizardry & Wild Romance, A Study of Epic Fantasy – Michael Moorcock
Writing:(I’m slacking here)

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Workshoping:

I havn't abandoned this blog!

But, oh, have I been busy!

I’ve been working on this special project, and I haven’t really talked about it here yet. I believe I mentioned it two months ago (?!?) in my last post. But I thought it was time to formally cross-blog about it.

A couple writer friends and I have put together a group, Greater Portland Scribists, or GPS. We meet weekly (yes that’s why I’ve been so busy), to discuss our group progress, each other’s writing and to write. Hopefully by next summer we will be able to produce an anthology ebook of our stuff. In the mean time we are keeping our blog up to date with ebook news and weekly (Wednesday) articles written by us. I just posted yesterday myself. Go read it!

Of course, I’m also still working on getting published in the magazines and will try to publish my novel after it is revised, which I will do after I have a short story published. And my 3 year plan is to become a member of SFWA.

So with all that going on, I’ve found myself kinda burnt out of my own writing goals. Time to change that. With winter coming, I think I’ll be able to look inward and really get what I want, and soon. 🙂

Currently Reading
Fantasy: Moonwise – Greer Gilman
Scholarly: Wizardry & Wild Romance, A Study of Epic Fantasy – Michael Moorcock
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On Fate’s Waiting List

I've been writing

I’ve been working on the artisan story that got rejected by flash fiction online last March. I’ve given it a lot of thought and even workshopped it with my fellow scribists. It is now 6 pages long, and it ends. That’s right. I wrote a short story that ends. And I really love the way it is turning out.

I’ll be workshopping it with my meetup group, Rocketship Unicorn at the end of the month. And then hopefully submitting it.

Now I just need to work on rewriting my old story, The Making, from before Seton Hill. It’s a creation myth and I’ve been recently inspired on how to end it :).

I feel a trend coming on.

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Fantasy: Brotherhood of the Wolf – David Farland
Scholarly: Wizardry & Wild Romance, A Study of Epic Fantasy – Michael Moorcock
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Soul Starved

just something to keep me going…

“Genre is a matter of knowledge, which some people have (e.g. those writers who produce genre fiction and those readers who make their way through it) and other people don’t. It is impossible not just to write, but to market and sell and to review or read, a crime novel (for example) without a good understanding of the history of the genre and the various ways in which it has worked. Genre, in other words, has no time for naivety or ignorance.” –POPULAR FICTION by Ken Gelder

The Magicians–Lev Grossman

Quick review today…

Overall, I loved reading this book. Grossman’s style is impressive as is his vocabulary. He strings words and phrases and paragraphs together to create admirable passages.

So this lovely writing was pretty much what let me get through the book itself. Think Holden Caulfield meets Harry Potter. Except our MC is no prophesied hero who is going to save the world. He’s just your normal person, who happens to be able to do magic, trying to get through life.

We have our emo, smarty pants high school student, Quentin Coldwater, whose every wish is granted when he is transported to a college where he will study magic. That part of the book I related to. I went to college and it was pretty much the same kind of thing for Quentin–except there was magic. Watching college kids learn to handle magic was indeed entertaining.

But when he graduates the book takes a major downturn. Quentin is confused about what to do after college when he no longer has a curriculum to follow, is no longer under the institutional umbrella. This is the standard quarter life crisis problem. I went through that too, but he reacts to the situation very poorly. He never grows up; never faces the challenge of living his life and it makes me kind of hate him.

Then, when it gets so bad that he does have to grow up and deal with life, he pretty much gives up and sits there doing nothing with his life until his friends come and save him.

One thing the story left me out of was “the Narnia thing.” Grossman made the characters obsessed with C. S. Lewis’ Narnia stories, but calling it Fillory instead because of permissions issues. I never read these stories, a shame I know, so all of the references were lost to me.

While I didn’t like what Quentin what doing, it fit his character and the circumstances making the whole work cohesive. Grossman tied the beginning to the end and wrapped it up neatly.

I finished reading the book for the great style, and the rest of the characters. They reminded me of many people I’ve known and they didn’t react to “Real Life” as badly as Quentin did.

So if you like to watch other people suffer, or just love to be sympathetic toward them, this is an excellent book in every way.

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Fantasy: Brotherhood of the Wolf – David Farland
Scholarly: Wizardry & Wild Romance, A Study of Epic Fantasy – Michael Moorcock
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not really

You only think this is a post….

I’m just showing my excitement because I’m leaving for Readercon in Burlington, MA tomorrow 😀

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Fantasy: The Magicians – Lev Grossman
Scholarly: Wizardry & Wild Romance, A Study of Epic Fantasy – Michael Moorcock
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I've written

I’ve finished writing the rough draft of my labyrinth story. 🙂 I just need to fix a ton of things and add a scene or two. Hopefully I can keep it below 5000 when I’m done revising.

I hope I don’t do what I did with this story ever again. I started writing it months and months ago. I knew the ending of it and then just got bogged down in the middle. It sat and sat and sat and I never finished it.

As a writer who tends not to write outlines, I think that by knowing the end I just wasn’t excited about writing it as I already knew what it would be. However I am using outlines more and more these days.

If I want to be a professional writer, I need to stick to the writing no matter what. I need to make myself outline and blow through the rough draft then revise. Otherwise I just won’t make the deadlines and therefore a living.

Currently Reading
Fantasy: The Magicians – Lev Grossman
Scholarly: Wizardry & Wild Romance, A Study of Epic Fantasy – Michael Moorcock
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Spellwright by Blake Charlton

So this one is not quite a classic. I needed to take a break from the classic fantasy literature and get into some fresh work by someone new. Well, I may have decided that after hearing about this book. I came across it during the Amazon/Macmillan kerfuffle at the beginning of the year. As this book was set to release in March, it was used as an example of how Amazon was hurting the authors more than the publishers. Charlton is a new author so having Amazon pull his publishing house near the release date would really hurt his numbers if it wasn’t resolved quickly.

So I took a look at the book. The cover was intriguing, it had great blurbs from trusted sources and, and the title was a pun. Yes I love puns, deal with it. But the pun didn’t just end with the title, it extended throughout the book in a beautiful conceit. It was a high fantasy to boot, something that is losing steam in the publishing industry. This book was something I had to read. And a few months later, I checked it out of my local library. I can’t afford to go and buy hardcovers these days, and read it cover to cover blowing off the other things I should have been doing…

There aren’t just puns! There are also many fun linguistic twists that really tickled my love of language. The magic system is entirely based on language, so Charlton had many opportunities for word-play that he took advantage of.

I liked more than just the language of this cute, quick read of a book. The fantasy tropes were used in a fresh way. The main character, Nicodemus, is prophesied to save language but something wasn’t quite right. He has a language disability, what we’d call dyslexia, which affects his magical abilities in profound ways. Like I said in my last post, I really like when prophecies are used differently. “There was this prophecy, but it’s wrong and we can’t use it to guide our steps.” The notion brings a very realistic flair to the lives of our main characters and makes me appreciate their problems much more.

Much of the story is rooted more in the local and broad politics and religion of Nicodemus’ world. This is a complex and full world. On all levels, different powers have different magical languages and they all have their own political agendas. Charlton expertly weaves a complex political web, letting characters represent different factions and letting the conflicts center in one small place. The political, religious and academic factions cross paths seen from the front row inside a small wizard’s school. Yet this is no Harry Potter. Nicodemus must win a war to save language, but first he must overcome his own limitations.

Charlton also pulls from mythological traditions. As far as I could tell, Norse, Celtic and Greek. And then he pushes them around and alters them for his own uses. These gods are not just figureheads in stories, they are real beings and are seeking their own ends, but they must first get by the humans who oppose them. They are not all powerful and they have their own rules to live by. This makes them interesting and complex characters, and another layer of conflict.

Charlton’s style is smooth and I really didn’t have too many complaints about the story. If I have to put one in this post it would be about the pacing. It felt to me that he had the most tension built up for a turning point in the story as opposed to the final denouement, and the end didn’t wrap up nicely, but dragged out a little bit (hello sequel?).

I think I will buy the paperback when it comes out because I know I will want to re-read this book, and lend it out as well.

Currently Reading
Fantasy: The Magicians – Lev Grossman
Scholarly: Wizardry & Wild Romance, A Study of Epic Fantasy – Michael Moorcock
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